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AN ARCHITECTURE DESIGNED
Contributed by
FlintHunter
on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 08:09:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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AN ARCHITECTURE DESIGNED
An architecture designed
Of the wind. A closed network
Of clouds — of storm clouds. A web
Of nonsense, pretense, and rebellion.
A theater of lined
Mechanic. A rancid circus
Where play clowns. A mist. A nebulous
Display Of. Here lurk
The lost, the careless, the fruitless
Farmers. Territory. Mind.
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Flint Hunter 2011
Copyright ©
FlintHunter
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2011-09-15 08:09:09]
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Re: AN ARCHITECTURE DESIGNED
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 10:55:38 AM AEST
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This passage: is extensively brilliant....
There is so much...wisdom,
so much artistic -- relevance.
This is one of those writes --
where you are overwhelmed --
by all it's component's....
Far beyond awesome.
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: AN ARCHITECTURE DESIGNED
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by FlintHunter on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 02:36:17 PM AEST
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| Thanks you for your exuberant comments on An Architecture Designed. This is in a form I developed myself -- and there IS -- believe it or not -- a rhyme-scheme -- but it not obvious. Your love of the poem is a real compliment to me. All I can do is say THANK YOU! -- david |
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Re: AN ARCHITECTURE DESIGNED
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 08:41:49 PM AEST
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Awesome work, friend.
Blessings, huggs,
emy |
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Re: AN ARCHITECTURE DESIGNED
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th November 2011 @ 08:17:45 AM AEST
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| you really do have a way with words, and you're so unique!! this is to the point, and so true. uniquely done! |
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