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Smile
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 05:30:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Smile
We all have to smile
Just turn your frown upside down
But to show teeth or not?
Cheesy grin or your fangs out?
Debonair, Bond like, smirk?
Some people have a natural smiley face
I have a face like that
I look so happy and content
With my jovial expression
But all you see is the exterior
Inside sometimes I’m crying
I’m sad, grumpy, ***** off
But I put on a smile anyway
A smile makes the world brighter
Even in dark times
So show me your smile
Once in a while
By banjosandwitch 14/09/11
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banjosandwitch
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2011-09-15 05:30:32]
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Re: Smile
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by FlintHunter on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 07:12:37 AM AEST
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Again, a one-of-a-kind poem. It's really special and I will try to take your excellent advice. Hard to force a smile -- but I think your poem made me smile -- on the outside... regardless, it made me smile on the inside. It's all terrific, but I especially like the last quatrain... This is a good genre for you -- happy and light-hearted -- and clever; it seems to me your natural way -- the words so easily flow...
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Re: Smile
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 08:50:45 PM AEST
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Awesome smile u got there.
Great work of art.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Smile
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by mvvenkataraman on
Saturday, 17th September 2011 @ 04:53:07 AM AEST
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Dear respected banjosandwitch,
With you I totally agree
Smile gives great glee
To smile, I make a plea
Smile makes mind free..
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman |
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Re: Smile
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th October 2011 @ 07:25:42 PM AEST
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| perfectly written. i was trying to come up with a poem titled ' smile ', but i couldn't find the right words. you did. i don't smile. i have no reason to. i like this poem. you have the words in it i wish i could've come up with. |
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