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All is lost
Contributed by
razorbladerose
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Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Such a dark place where I am
I suggest you stay away
Or you could wind up like me
Being cold and useless to even yourself
I am faded for even the world to not see
Even I barely notice
Ive gone away, I don't know where
But I do know I don't want to be here no more
I no longer have will or ambition
Only dreams of the impossible
Could this count for something? I wonder
Emptiness takes over all I suppose
If I had the guts I would once and for all vanish
If only for the sake of once being able to know
That I have made at least someone happy
I guess it just isn't the wrong time yet
Almost everyone I have come to know went away
Even the voices in my head only whisper to me
Feeling like a teenager once did
If I known then how worst it would be, would I have vanished then instead?
Copyright © Jeannie T. 2003
Copyright ©
razorbladerose
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2003-04-30 00:05:00]
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Re: All is lost
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 06:03:45 AM AEST
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you have a talent to express your feelings..know that as dismal as things look there is always hope..keep writing I will keep reading
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Re: All is lost
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by tawakwan on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 02:45:45 PM AEST
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You obviously write from the heart,and it show.
it is special.
thank you very much |
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