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A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter
Contributed by
FlintHunter
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Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 09:10:46 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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A Colombian Man
OKAY. I thought to write something
Cute or smart or poetic and
Like literary and all that --
Then the phone rang. It was Gabe. He
Told me Karla's uncle just died.
The man lived in Colombia.
This man in Colombia, see,
To me, he was just a man at best...
As the news began to set in,
I found myself in a flashback —
But this one wasn't of my own...
What came next, I won't soon forget.
...I was somewhere in Colombia --
Tropical breeze -- palm trees -- Okay
I was he -- the man -- ninety years old.
I heard the telephone ring -- I --
I answered it. "Hello?" -- Spoke a cold voice:
"Is it time?" “Who," I said, "is this?"
UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter (2011)
Copyright ©
FlintHunter
... [
2011-09-14 09:10:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Savannah1085 on
Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 09:20:54 AM AEST (User
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..............Wow....let me guess....the caller was Destiny? Death? I'm not sure, but that was a really great poem :) Great job
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Re: A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter
(User Rating: 1 ) by aulakh on
Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 06:29:27 PM AEST (User
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death was great sooth. but you described situation 'its wonderful experience how man feel when he alive. very good poem. |
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Re: A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter
(User Rating: 1 ) by Banjosandwitch on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 05:46:32 AM AEST (User
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SPOOKY COOL |
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Re: A Colombian Man -- by UNORTHODOX and FlintHunter
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Thursday, 15th September 2011 @ 10:03:58 AM AEST (User
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Nice indeed. Time life death and the unknown... a combination of these things sets a definite tone. great job.
ming |
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