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Problems and Pills
Contributed by
faffeee
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Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We had a problem, so you took a pill
Purposefully going against my will
If you couldn’t face me you’d reach for the gin
It gave you a way of not letting me in
Things got unhappy, you went for a smoke
A clever way of turning it into a joke
As early as 10am with a glass in your hand
Time of day didn’t stop you when things got too bad
Missing for days and nights with no word
Me searching around for someone who had heard
Then turning up like nothing had changed
“Hey babe, how’s it goin’” like we could be the same
A nervous worry I grew accustomed to hiding
Never knew when I’d see you, could be Monday or Friday
In the end it's ironic, I have now found
You finally left me, not the other way round.
Copyright ©
faffeee
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2003-04-29 22:25:00]
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Re: Problems and Pills
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by vydana on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 12:33:05 AM AEST
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| It's sad :( But well written :) |
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Re: Problems and Pills
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by norm on
Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 07:29:51 PM AEST
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You wrote it beautifully...Too bad,
you didn't dump him before he
stupidly left you.... |
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Re: Problems and Pills
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by faffeee on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 09:35:46 AM AEST
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| haha thanks, i've always thought the same thing myself, it being so much easier to see that now! thanks for your comment, xxx |
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Re: Problems and Pills
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by steved on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 11:01:33 PM AEST
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forgot what it's like to be a student in uk. everything seemed so significant i supose. now, the ideology has disapated, but the words remain!!
we all been thu it.
just write in different ways.
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essex boy |
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Re: Problems and Pills
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by steved on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 11:02:40 PM AEST
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forgot what it's like to be a student in uk. everything seemed so significant i supose. now, the ideology has disapated, but the words remain!!
we all been thu it.
just write in different ways.
x
essex boy |
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Re: Problems and Pills
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 11:19:27 PM AEST
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wow, another brilliantly written poem, i love this one, its fits together perfectly, sorry about him leaving you, you'll find somebody new
- becca |
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Re: Problems and Pills
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by gem48 on
Wednesday, 25th June 2003 @ 03:15:13 PM AEST
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Thank you. You made me think about i may be putting others true as i fit the person in your poem. From the bottom of my heart thank you.
Gem
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