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puppet boys
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 09:47:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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like swallowing
a stone
enough
too much
and
nothing at all
softening
it
up
an aid
(or weapon)
trifling!
outer layer
breaks
broken puppets
broken strings
PAIN
falls
away.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-09-09 09:47:12]
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Re: puppet boys
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 11:01:51 AM AEST
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I felt the darkness, and truth melding
to have their points made
In a sense it's sad puppets indeed
too blind or weak, to see the same old trojan methods in use
well written, we can only keep trying
although I think the water's to deep for most
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: puppet boys
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by FlintHunter on
Saturday, 10th September 2011 @ 07:52:46 PM AEST
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puppet boys
Contributed by ming on Friday, September 09 2011 @ 09:47:12 AEST
Topic: Abstract Poetry
Absolutely ming! Nothing in between. Pure, unadulterated, ming; mingled with nothing without. A pleasure, as always, dear ming. Reading your poetry is so EASY (not shouting, dear, emphasizing is all). This one is a breeze! Thanks for the air. --flinthunter |
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