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in the shadows
Contributed by
ming
on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 09:10:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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of trees
without
world-truth
rolled
maple leaves
tied with twine
a gift this
amulet-growth
no matter
jackals
run with
ghosts
last
words
wouded-Mother
ended world
without end
a salve
aching spirit's
dark-age
before...
Renaissance.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-09-09 09:10:42]
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Re: in the shadows
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 09:47:40 AM AEST
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| Another triumph! I have the feeling that just about everything you write is wonderful. I love it when a poem as short -- sometimes I don't have the patience to read long poems (ADHD); your poems are unique in style and I know I will have to read this one many times before I can say I really understand it -- on some level. Yet just the sound of it speaks -- and the few little bits of understanding I get are enough for me for now. Good. Very. Very. Good. Thank you! |
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Re: in the shadows
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 09:48:10 AM AEST
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| Another triumph! I have the feeling that just about everything you write is wonderful. I love it when a poem as short -- sometimes I don't have the patience to read long poems (ADHD); your poems are unique in style and I know I will have to read this one many times before I can say I really understand it -- on some level. Yet just the sound of it speaks -- and the few little bits of understanding I get are enough for me for now. Good. Very. Very. Good. Thank you! |
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Re: in the shadows
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 11:10:48 AM AEST
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Definitely a showmanship of wit
metaphorically a beast,I mean it took
a lot for me to just grasp the concept
let alone not have my mind completely blown
nice!
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Re: in the shadows
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by thezenmonkey on
Tuesday, 13th September 2011 @ 06:33:00 AM AEST
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Good poem
way to complex for my simple mind to comprehend
I don't understand it yet still like it. |
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