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SOME SHIPS DON'T SINK
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FlintHunter
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Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 06:45:42 AM in AEST
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SOME SHIPS DON'T SINK
SOME ships don’t sink
Some songs don’t weep
Some days don't die
Some rivers you think
So steady so deep
Can never run dry
Some days don’t die
Some songs don’t weep
Some ships don’t sink
Some ships don’t sink
Some ships don’t sink
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Flint Hunter (2008)
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Re: SOME SHIPS DON'T SINK
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by Savannah1085 on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 07:36:27 AM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel. A few weeks ago, my friend died in a car accident. I was soo heartbroken. The last thing I said to him was "See you in a hour, Jacob." As it turns out, I didn't see him. For days. Later on I saw the crash in the paper....I miss him....Trust me, I know how you feel |
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Re: SOME SHIPS DON'T SINK
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by AmberAmethyst on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 04:31:39 PM AEST
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thanks 4 commenting on my poems...hav u read desires and hatred & pain?
anyway i know how it feels and im glad u were able to turn it into somethin good. |
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Re: SOME SHIPS DON'T SINK
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by jonquilcottage on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 04:54:35 PM AEST
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| short but beautifully put |
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Re: SOME SHIPS DON'T SINK
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 11:40:43 PM AEST
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There is such a tender and bitter sweet beauty in this write. Nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: SOME SHIPS DON'T SINK
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 10th September 2011 @ 02:00:44 PM AEST
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| your incredibly brave for sharing this part of yourself with us. thank you for posting this. losing a loved one is so tragic, just like a sinking ship, but you have the strength to stay afloat..you are a very strong and brave soul. |
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Re: SOME SHIPS DON'T SINK
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by mvvenkataraman on
Saturday, 10th September 2011 @ 06:34:00 PM AEST
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Dear respected FlintHunter,
A mother is a really special person
Her body was once our prison
Father made the first admission
To release, she gave permission
A mother less child has sorrows
And in a way bleak tomorrows
May God kindly soothe your heart
God alone can fetch you comfort.
Nice write,
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
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