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Raining night
Contributed by
aulakh
on
Thursday, 8th September 2011 @ 07:01:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Raining night
This is the raining night.
we are too close and
burning candle with thin bright.
Feelings of Warmth and chill going on fight.
At midnight
i open window
cold air comes into room.
How the love sickness
turn into sadness of life.
Save me please save.
I am into dark cave.
o god
Please save.
By. Jatinder aulakh
Copyright ©
aulakh
... [
2011-09-08 19:01:46]
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Re: Raining night
(User Rating: 1 )
by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 05:26:58 AM AEST
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| DEEP SWEET lived the smplicity |
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Re: Raining night
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by FlintHunter on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 05:47:25 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful and tender poem. It makes me think... I feel the rain and the fire and the sadness and I hear the sad prayer: and i know this is how I feel too. You are writing better and better. Keep writing! --FlintHunter |
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