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HOPELESSLY IMPRISONED
Contributed by
FlintHunter
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Tuesday, 6th September 2011 @ 08:03:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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HOPELESSLY IMPRISONED
Hopelessly imprisoned.
Wait we for no saviour.
Soldiers stationary.
Confined — solitary.
We suffered our lessons.
Just following orders.
There will be inquiry.
We will cross no borders.
Imprisoned — imaginary.
We stand at attention.
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Flint Hunter (2011)
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Re: HOPELESSLY IMPRISONED
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Tuesday, 6th September 2011 @ 08:31:14 AM AEST
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The despair and waiting period for those "hopelessly imprisoned" are agonizing and can be felt withing your poem. May these prisoners be set free by the love of Jesus,
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Re: HOPELESSLY IMPRISONED
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 6th September 2011 @ 03:21:09 PM AEST
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| A prison of the mind is no laughing matter. Well done. |
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Re: HOPELESSLY IMPRISONED
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 6th September 2011 @ 07:59:28 PM AEST
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Very powerful with your unique pizzazz.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: HOPELESSLY IMPRISONED
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by ming on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 09:23:49 AM AEST
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Our pens stand at attention no bounds every border open every bar a dream...my feelings from your write. thank you.
ming |
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