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I AM SICK OF THINKING
Contributed by
FlintHunter
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Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 08:52:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I AM SICK OF THINKING
I am sick of thinking.
About is a cave —
Older,
Colder
Than stolid star — blinking —
Winking at sold slave;
A bolder
Stone would to save
Soldier
Sinking —
________________
--FlintHunter 2011
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Re: I AM SICK OF THINKING
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by ammar on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 10:58:15 AM AEST
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What I like most about this one is the positioning of the rhymes which is effective in giving a mysterious air to it.
Exceptional piece! Keep writing
Peace
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Re: I AM SICK OF THINKING
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 11:16:26 AM AEST
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Very creative.
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Re: I AM SICK OF THINKING
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by angelabella on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 03:42:56 PM AEST
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Very creative rhyming pattern.
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Re: I AM SICK OF THINKING
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by ming on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 09:30:32 AM AEST
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This ROCKS! About is a cave JUMPED for me! I want to steal that sentence! The best are often the words grasping for paper. Loving your pen...
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