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no name
Contributed by
ringo
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Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 04:13:29 AM in AEST
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I look at my time and Im aflame
The sophisticated motions of thinking burns
Desegregation of my listless eyes
Robs my blind carcass of sleep
The disturbings distillory focuses on slc
My martyr advocates regression
And my hands fight an kalidoscope entity
My eyes gone lost , taken , stolen
The gods can't quite my bodies quarrel
I'm suffocated in my own skin
All I want is to be purged of thoughts of you
Your wicked weathered widow ways wastes my life
Your warmth makes me sweat and I drink
To the fallen star the sun implies another day
To fix my.roots
Copyright ©
ringo
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2011-09-05 04:13:29]
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Re: no name
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 11:26:14 AM AEST
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Very creative.
some times it's like that.
When the head slows down its a blessings,
huggs,
emy |
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Re: no name
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 04:13:34 PM AEST
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when this happens try to find something soothing you can concentrate on to keep your mind on one thing.
Maybe a song on a loop, or reciting something, anyways, that helps me when I feel like this. |
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Re: no name
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th September 2011 @ 11:55:57 PM AEST
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Great, expressive verse. I get this cycle believe me.
Michelle |
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