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close enough
Contributed by
ming
on
Sunday, 4th September 2011 @ 10:29:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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looking
for gods
without
names
twisted
and broken
in shadows
secrets
hanging heavy
spiders
in my hair
and papers
with
a hundred
thoughts
deeper into
consequence
and desperation
threads
unweave
till lies
are comforft
left,
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-09-04 10:29:02]
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Re: close enough
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Sunday, 4th September 2011 @ 11:57:02 AM AEST
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A strong poetic passage
from start to finish I can feel the preassure being released
eletric flashes of truth mingled with a forceful presence
a keen write well done
words fail to convey how I appreciate this write
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Re: close enough
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 12:06:05 PM AEST
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Very creative write.
Blessings,
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