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I wrote it for you
Contributed by
WoM
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Sunday, 4th September 2011 @ 08:35:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I climbed the highest mountains
to enrich my senses
Swam in the wildest waters
and learned to see beneath the surface
Wandered in the deepest forests
to reach the core of things
Went to heaven to come
closer to the meaning of our lives
I filled sentences with words
Phrases containing
and formulations with answers
In order to give it to you
Copyright ©
WoM
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2011-09-04 08:35:18]
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Re: I wrote it for you
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by ammar on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 11:03:39 AM AEST
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A good write. 'Wildest waters' is a gripping phrase and the highlight of this poem for me.
Keep writing
Peace
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Re: I wrote it for you
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 04:15:47 PM AEST
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We are all an accumulation of our experiences. I think this poem captures that. Well done. |
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