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I REMEMBER YOUR QUEER STORY ABOUT CURTAINS
Contributed by
FlintHunter
on
Saturday, 3rd September 2011 @ 06:26:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I REMEMBER YOUR QUEER STORY ABOUT CURTAINS
I remember your queer story about curtains —
But I don't know why it has stayed in my mind.
Maybe it's like something you happen to find
In some closet you might open now and then —
Something — you-are — suddenly — here. Again.
And — for no particular reason. Defined
It a place and time long-ago. Designed
So as to be vague — veiled; certainly no friend.
Yet neither dread enemy this dusty
Memento from a When — I'd not have had —
Yet still stab barely as then dull and pointless knife.
Now drawn now brandished now ready: MIND YOU! rusty
Gut bare-laid brain — here — pain... still-in-vain... still sad...
Still uncertain still gush purple blood life —
___________________
--Flint Hunter (2010)
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Re: I REMEMBER YOUR QUEER STORY ABOUT CURTAINS
(User Rating: 1 ) by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 3rd September 2011 @ 10:09:17 PM AEST (User
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The imagery is of a time when things where dusty, somehow hazy sort of like a childhood attic this piece is blatantly dark, shadowy like an old black and white film I truly enjoyed this piece, because it takes on a life of it's own a masterful scribe!
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Re: I REMEMBER YOUR QUEER STORY ABOUT CURTAINS
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 06:42:35 AM AEST (User
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I was a child afraid, confused and alone in the vivid, dark, stunning write. I may never look at dusty curtains the same again.
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Re: I REMEMBER YOUR QUEER STORY ABOUT CURTAINS
(User Rating: 1 ) by alicewhite on
Friday, 24th March 2017 @ 11:50:57 AM AEST (User
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This film was white it ended with ants on a curtain , I saw it today , as the curtains closed open , stranger than fiction and me , great timeless write in time for the curtain call x |
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