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THERE IS A PLACE -- INSIDE --
Contributed by
FlintHunter
on
Saturday, 3rd September 2011 @ 12:54:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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THERE IS A PLACE INSIDE
There is a place inside
Where is Quiet.
You wish you could get There
Or you dont. You forget There
Is most of the time... Died
The days loudly as trumpets as riots
As Rebellion-reaction to where
The stiffness is-is. To know why it
Matters is not Days concern bare,
Full of trumpets and those who would blast them outside.
_________________
Flint Hunter 2011)
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FlintHunter
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2011-09-03 12:54:07]
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Re: THERE IS A PLACE -- INSIDE --
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 3rd September 2011 @ 09:57:24 PM AEST
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I'm endeared to the last line
it say's so much, explains so much
the picture it painted was worth....
the poem it's self had depth dimensions
and touch on things
in a way I who usually pay 20 bucks to see
but the truth is this passage is priceless
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Re: THERE IS A PLACE -- INSIDE --
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by ming on
Wednesday, 14th September 2011 @ 06:50:32 AM AEST
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In my mind, this explains why I am a night owl. Love love love...
ming |
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