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come on come on
Contributed by
Apartment213
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Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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come and kiss me while i still am sobbing
so u can make it count
fall down in a lonely room and ignore the mirror
yesterdays poison only grew on my shoulder
ill pack my bags ill leave this town
come and kiss me while i still am sobbing
take all ur problems and rip me apart
take this day and break my heart
if i could feel ur pretty voice
i dont think i need to see at all
if u wanna love me come behind my back
i have the intention and we've seen hell
the truth is never heard wrap me up
ill scream u out just to sing ur name
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Re: come on come on
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 04:15:28 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem, so full of emotion. I love it.
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Re: come on come on
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by AngryPrincess on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:16:15 PM AEST
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wow kenny....i absolutely love it! :O) you know i love everything you write...you're amazing! i'll kiss you, but you wont be sobbing ;O)
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Re: come on come on
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:10:08 AM AEST
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| wow!!!! |
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