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In His World

Contributed by inspiredhearts on Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 12:54:38 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

He covers his fears with a cloak of silence

as if the entire world itself has a blindfold

a blindfold blocking it from him

they can't see him and he can't see them

he keeps to his own

his world is perfect

but his world isn't really reality

his world is just a really vivid imagining

in his world his pictures talk

and hes not labeled as crazy when he

responds

his bestfriend is the man in the mirror

he doesn't listen much

but every word he hears becomes

cheers

he sleeps with his eyes open

and sees what goes unnoticed

to most it is

in his world

a crack in the ground leads to a new sky

each doorway is a hole to a new life

in his world....

in his world the good always survive

but his worlds a lie

his world only exists in his mind

he doesnt need help

he needs a sign

he needs a sign.

Copyright © inspiredhearts ... [ 2011-09-02 12:54:38]
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Re: In His World (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Saturday, 3rd September 2011 @ 01:11:24 PM AEST
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Ah yes! I too went through a period of depression which enclosed me in my own little world. Truthfully, I felt more of an urge to escape this than to keep to myself. It's great to know that you have been pulled out of such a state. As for your poem, I enjoyed reading it very much and believe we all can relate to it at some point in our lives. Take care and God bless,
Deidra

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