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My Shadow
Contributed by
vydana
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Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
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I look down to the ground, and what do I see,
My dark a tormenting shadow, following me,
From this shadow, I can never escape.
A resemblance of my body is its shape,
But it holds inside its black core,
The emotions I can’t handle anymore.
It taunts me with this sadness and pain,
My end and demise, in itself it contains.
To run from it I constantly try,
Your plan for my end, I attempt to defy,
But, I fear you are too strong to fight.
Knowing you’re a shadow, I flee the light,
Thinking that will be your death, your end,
But to be happy in this darkness, I cannot pretend.
Surrounded by blackness, weak and alone,
To lash out, to cry, to run from those I know
Is what my heart and soul tells me I should do.
How I feel in my heart, to you I can’t construe.
So, alone with my shadow this battle will be fought,
And to a place of peace, my soul will be brought.
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vydana
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Re: My Shadow
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by Metalmouth666 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 09:31:57 PM AEST
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| Very nice, touching and deep good job. |
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Re: My Shadow
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 10:51:56 AM AEST
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Great poem. I particularly like the last 2 lines. It is really deep and moving.
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Re: My Shadow
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 07:45:57 PM AEST
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Very well written. I enjoyed this immensely I have felt like that at times. Wanting to flee from something or someone, but being unable to.
Surrounded by blackness, weak and alone,
To lash out, to cry, to run from those I know
Loved those 2 lines spoke to me deeply
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Re: My Shadow
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by Wrybod on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 02:49:37 AM AEST
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Imagination has been both the blessing and the curse of mankind .It is only by contolling it that we have survived. If and when it controls us we perish.
It's your choice |
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Re: My Shadow
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 02:16:08 AM AEST
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| Hey, pal! Don't admit defeat! Failure is a step to success. Anyway, try reading my poem 'Conqueror' in this site. I think it will be inspirational for ya.! See ya soon pal! |
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Re: My Shadow
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by vydana on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 12:19:23 PM AEST
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| Thank you everyone for the nice comments :) |
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