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DOLLY ONCE
Contributed by
FlintHunter
on
Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 06:53:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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DOLLY ONCE
Dolly
Once
I was
Outside
I was
Once
Out — where
Are
Out — where
Were
And wide-eyed I cried
Once
Olivia
I was
In
Bolivia
And once
Doris
I was
In Paris
Outside
Dolly
Was
There
At least
Many
Times
Dolly
You
Are
A
Sweet
One
I will
Remember
You
Copyright ©
FlintHunter
... [
2011-09-02 06:53:26]
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Re: DOLLY ONCE
(User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on
Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 10:24:06 AM AEST
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Re: DOLLY ONCE
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 10:36:41 AM AEST
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I must say that is truly unique
this passage is original, and creative,
in a way I can not explain,
the way you must have felt,
is conveyed so genuinely,
which makes it all the more vivid
truly artistic
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Re: DOLLY ONCE
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 06:05:17 PM AEST
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Very sweet.
smiles,
emy |
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