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I WILL TAKE A TRIP
Contributed by
flinthunter
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Thursday, 1st September 2011 @ 09:29:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I WILL TAKE A TRIP
I will take a trip
To Somewhere Else
I will go
There by
Train
I will take a trip
To Somewhere Else
I will go
There by
Bus
I will take a trip
To Somewhere Else
I will go
There by
Myself.
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flinthunter
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2011-09-01 09:29:57]
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Re: I WILL TAKE A TRIP
(User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 1st September 2011 @ 05:26:43 PM AEST
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I enjoy the easy-to-read and repetitive style. Thank you for posting and may you keep contributing wonderful writes,
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Re: I WILL TAKE A TRIP
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by UNORTHODOX on
Friday, 2nd September 2011 @ 11:19:01 AM AEST
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I admire the determination of this piece
what's genius about it is
the sincereity,I can picture in my mind
the character in question,on this journey
with no destination in mind, just going
profound in it's entirety
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Re: I WILL TAKE A TRIP
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by vikki on
Sunday, 4th September 2011 @ 12:10:58 AM AEST
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| This is so nice n short poem n yet holds so much of essence in itself, good work |
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Re: I WILL TAKE A TRIP
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by ming on
Sunday, 4th September 2011 @ 10:15:42 AM AEST
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If you can hear a story no matter how it's written, it is a GOOD poem!
ming |
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