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aafterthought
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
on
Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 03:47:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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stars live only after dusk
to think that love is dry
and romance a loveless husk
i catch your eye
green are those dreams
where we lie
in the tint of glass
holy light beams
shatters high
to a black and stirring sky
bewildered i am by that of you
and you to i
but to cage i know would be a sin
and now my rhymes have worn thin
to live to die
smile in love
without it cry
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fortunesdancer
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2011-08-29 15:47:30]
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Re: aafterthought
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by LandsleyAlexandre on
Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 04:49:10 PM AEST
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| I love the metaphors at the begining and that was cool....keep writing!!!! |
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Re: aafterthought
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st October 2011 @ 06:36:13 AM AEST
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| Good poem, thanks for the read. |
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