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Eve
Contributed by
MLozano
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Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 12:44:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As sunset brightly started
All youth long but departed
A dusk significant as dawn
A moment that has come and gone
Knowledge turns into a foe
The scaling fear of letting go
Ascends to ever-calming peace
The greatest way for day to cease.
Copyright ©
MLozano
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2011-08-29 00:44:01]
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Re: Eve
(User Rating: 1 )
by poeticjestix on
Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 12:49:50 AM AEST
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| Not sure what it's about but you're rhyming is sublime. Flows like a dreamy chocolate escalator |
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Re: Eve
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th August 2011 @ 01:36:33 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Keep writing.
blessings,
emy
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