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stole a kiss
Contributed by
dee
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Friday, 26th August 2011 @ 02:49:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Nine days gone ,
heart please beat on.
Nothing going right.
Made a secret journey.
Stole a kiss last night .
Dark and strange,
block with no name.
Parked and holding tight.
my love is here
I pulled her near and
Stole a kiss last night.
Now I wish,
for one more kiss.
By that dim street light.
Can it be
She'd meet with me
To steal one more tonight.
Copyright ©
dee
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2011-08-26 14:49:33]
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Re: stole a kiss
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by cynicalgiraffe on
Friday, 26th August 2011 @ 11:17:19 PM AEST
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| i really like the words you used to rhyme with. it flows very nicely. |
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Re: stole a kiss
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 27th August 2011 @ 05:35:37 AM AEST
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You've creates a perfect description of secret love-very thrilling and mysterious. Keep on writing for I know you have a knack for it,
Deidra |
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