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I FEEL THE RHYTHM

Contributed by baboloki on Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 10:32:09 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Yes I can feel the rhythm of the sun
As it shimmers through the pellucid walls of your eyes
I can feel the rhythm as it makes body shake
I feel it when I stare at your long branched eyelashes
Winds blow me away with every glimpse your make

I feel the rhythm of the sun as I slide through your side bands
Curly as a curling iron can curl
Flaky flexible, flexes all the way
I feel the rhythm as it takes over me like a strong force
I can feel it, with every touch, contact I make
My skin screams in desire
I can see it dancing in delight
A tone of the song overcomes me like a dark cloud

I feel it deep, deep within the very mist of darkness
And every stare you give gives light
Every laugh you made steers things up
Into one untwined like two pieces in a pot

I can feel the rhythm
The sound of your feet makes beside my heart
The sound of the beating of your heart elevating beside me
As I kneel forward to touch your face
Your whole body becomes jealous
Screaming in detest
Your face feeling like a queen amongst queens
Like a crown and a tiara combined
I kneel forward to part thi lips
As they give way
Alarms go of beneath my skin
Snakes crawl underneath
And the fire lights a match
Until I feel the rhythm no more

I look back with a thought
To the rhythm that was once there but no more
Lying beside my corpse I feel no more
I am cold at heart
Your rhythm I feel no more
I cannot tell
But only lay beside and die before her eyes
Dripping in crystal liquid dropping to the ground
Showering my dead corpse in sprinkles almost like rain

Then I lay down beneath the ground
And darkness feels my tomb
No light to makes the birds cry
No light to, make my vision crystal clear
I am feeling no rhythm……….

Copyright Â© baboloki ... [ 2011-08-25 22:32:09]
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