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Lucid Waking
Contributed by
JeanClaudeVanColeridge
on
Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 01:02:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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If only I could float adrift,
through memories which I have to sift,
the deepest depths of my soul were killed,
Bliss and joy were heartily fulfilled.
I swim into an ocean, vast and grey
No difference is made if it's day.
The water sings a dynamic lament
Which only acts to further cement.
I walk through a forest, dark and tall
It makes my ego very small,
The darkest and blackest and dampest night
Where Earth's vast sun is a desired sight.
Concrete jungle, manmade mess,
Multiplies the people's distress.
Awake through night, awake through day,
Mortality it does not delay.
I surf on beams of molten light
It seems to be a successful flight.
Whether or not I would clasp it tight,
Depends not on if it's wrong or right.
Bundled together, weak and strong,
It does not matter, all along.
Seize every second on a whim,
Regardless of the mood it'll bring.
Here is the twist, I'm willing to tell,
Existence is just a passing smell,
Life may seem long to you or I,
We stare too long at the sky,
And our flame burns out,
In the blink of an eye.
Copyright ©
JeanClaudeVanColeridge
... [
2011-08-25 01:02:10]
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Re: Lucid Waking
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by emystar on
Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 01:27:39 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Awesome writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lucid Waking
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by angelabella on
Thursday, 25th August 2011 @ 03:43:54 PM AEST
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It's a great poem...and you got a vivid imagination....
keep on writing....:)) |
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