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A Second Time
Contributed by
spaceotter
on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 02:51:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She caught a shade of blue in her walk.
Cantering down the path to an unknown
destination.
Feeling content with the way she glowed.
I caught a glimmer of her in my aura.
Sitting I vibrate to the pitch of her energy.
It sings in my soul.
Turning she looks me in the eyes,
And we introduce our familiars.
They overlap-
And our souls intertwine.
The rapture pushes my spirit through its
shell.
This bubble of reality we call life.
Piercing it, she injects the beauty of herself.
I open my mouth and introduce myself-
a second time.
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spaceotter
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2002-08-03 14:51:19]
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Re: A Second Time
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by ginsdance on
Saturday, 3rd August 2002 @ 02:53:35 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful! So beautiful!!!! Thanks for sharing this, it definitely made me smile!
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Re: A Second Time
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 12:12:39 AM AEST
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A rarely use the words wow or awesome...but what else can I say? :)
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Re: A Second Time
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by chatabox on
Sunday, 4th August 2002 @ 01:02:04 AM AEST
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| exquisite! |
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Re: A Second Time
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by lilch4ever on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 01:52:00 PM AEST
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| That was good. Nice write. |
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