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My Heart Sings
Contributed by
maxshah912
on
Wednesday, 24th August 2011 @ 11:47:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My heart sing everyday.
Yes I love you. I love you lot!
Say it love...
Tell me its love between us that is going strong..
Call me name of love no other.
When u do my heart melts.
My heart sings every day.
Yes I love you. I love you lot!!
Without love this would not exist!
Wethout love no heart would have beat this fast.
My heart is reacing to you. Come love feel it.
This is proof of my love.
Call me name of love no other.
When u do my heart melts.
My heart sings every day.
Yes I love you. I love you lot!!
Two crazy lover we are.
When we meet in real what will you do?
I know what I am wanting to do!
Call me name of love no other.
When you do my heart melts.
My heart sings every day.
Yes I love you. I love you lot!!
If you and I never mat
Tell me what would have happend?
I know what would happend to me.
I would not be alive close to fullfeeling my dream.
Call me name of love no other.
When you do my heat melts.
My heart sings every day.
Yes I love you. I love you lot!!
My heart says world will remember my love for u,
Because my love for u is unique and gratter then all lovers from history combine.
Callme name of love no other.
When you do my heart melts.
My heart sings every day.
Yes I love you. I love you lot!!
Right now I am lonley. Lonly journy to you.
My quest to meet you is close to finish.
Oh love stick with me. Few more months!
Say it love Call me lovee no other.
When you do my heart melts!!!!!
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maxshah912
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2011-08-24 11:47:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My Heart Sings
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ramfire on
Wednesday, 24th August 2011 @ 12:56:13 PM AEST (User
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I like the way you repeat your last line of each stanza. It really prsses home the point that you do truly love that person. |
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Re: My Heart Sings
(User Rating: 1 ) by maxshah912 on
Wednesday, 24th August 2011 @ 11:14:55 PM AEST (User
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Thanks you so much.. I need to work on skills, still learning :P |
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