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selfish trip
Contributed by
ringo
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2011 @ 11:13:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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On my selfish trip
Infected rift widens and dispences sorrow
The drink flow endlessly
And my mind drifts wonderfully
Ever presistant she penitrates my mental visions
Another drink blurs the visual pain
And the outside storm brings rain to the desert
Draining my eyes of it's camofalge
Writhering the plaster smile
My heart dragged in glass for hours
The sad liquid never stop
And she is never gone
I want to pass out and not dream of her
So I add more to my drink so I can sleep
Restlessly my bones fracture
And its all black
Copyright ©
ringo
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2011-08-23 23:13:44]
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Re: selfish trip
(User Rating: 1 )
by angelabella on
Wednesday, 24th August 2011 @ 03:52:40 AM AEST
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| It's a good poem....but you have to check your spelling though......best type slowly..:) |
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Re: selfish trip
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by poeticjestix on
Wednesday, 24th August 2011 @ 02:07:55 PM AEST
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| I can almost feel the stickiness of the carpet. You describe this well |
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