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things happen
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 22nd August 2011 @ 10:31:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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singsong intonation
strings drawn
tight
or hang loose
as horror and awe
become one
shadows swarm
thick and sigh
and murmur
then soon fall
apart as if sugar
in a cup of tea
grasping pen
ink thick as syrup
picking
apart painful
humming bones
caging
trapped soul/heart
inevitable riptide
of subtext...
and metaphor.
Copyright ©
ming
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2011-08-22 10:31:41]
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Re: things happen
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Monday, 22nd August 2011 @ 08:23:07 PM AEST
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Hi ming!
This is by far one of my many favorites of yours. I love how the title denotes "Ahhh, what ever, things happen. . ."
but the context builds & builds & building still leaves that indelible mark on the mind that says "see me. . . breathe
me. . . feel me. . . be me. . . & at last & forever more you become one with the impression & perhaps one with ones self.
Great piece! I Love it ming!
:) elle |
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Re: things happen
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by UNORTHODOX on
Wednesday, 24th August 2011 @ 06:15:52 AM AEST
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I'm am truly honered to have read
this passage,If ever art were inspired this is one of those times
you absolutely surpassed the quota for pure creative genius today
so I will quit with this one
for I fear everything here after, would only be a motion
fantastic truly
-UNORTHODOX |
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