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expressions
Contributed by
ming
on
Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 07:56:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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made of ghosts
and anger
and a self-cotemplating
shadow
and zombified plug-in's
and word-bruised paper
and ego-chat strewn
like stale bread crumbs
and shreds of night
and mystery
and tangled worn out beliefs
and shredded discarded souls
and whispers of nothing
and a language
hard to understand...
she talks in ink.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-08-21 19:56:10]
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Re: expressions
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Monday, 22nd August 2011 @ 06:52:58 AM AEST
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What a compelling piece
the way you divulged of the human condition (experience)
moves me because it's so familar, yet beneath
the bright ligths of self importance we assume as human
this write had the effect of exposing the wretchdness
(which is)for the first time
brilliant, powerful,well done
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Re: expressions
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by elle on
Monday, 22nd August 2011 @ 08:29:57 PM AEST
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This is just juicey!! It's mingelious!!
From "word-bruised paper" to "whispers of nothing" I love love love this in it's (your) entirety.
Excellent post. :) elle |
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