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A Rose to Propose
Contributed by
2bpositive
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Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 05:22:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Aye, the rose stands alone
with subtle powers to atone
solitude and faith, will behold
love between souls unfold
Sadness flees, hands clutch
tears melt away, hearts touch
lips meet, with a tender grace
as two people face, and embrace
Silent moonlight, echoes of the waves
a chance to eternity, the moment paves
on a sandy beach, with a heart to soar
beseeching her hand, bliss forever more
Soft cheeks can no longer hide
her emotions are too built up inside
embracing him with the love she's kept
silence now spoke, together they wept
Remembering how the moon paled that endless night
untainted love borne from the depths, burning bright
no longer would sadness endure, no longer to defy
Love found its true nest, never again to say good-bye
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2bpositive
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2011-08-21 05:22:04]
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Re: A Rose to Propose
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by angelabella on
Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 06:27:54 AM AEST
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| It's a good poem....what you're trying to portrait is very vivid...and I can really relate to it....good job..:) |
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Re: A Rose to Propose
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by mvvenkataraman on
Sunday, 21st August 2011 @ 08:05:02 AM AEST
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You have very beautifully rhymed
And submitted a great poetry
A crown through words is made
Poetry Goddess is asked to wear
I am in a way greatly surprised
Due to your skillful words' display
My humble praise is now heaped
Can you please continue this?
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman |
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Re: A Rose to Propose
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by Shyness on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2011 @ 10:19:22 PM AEST
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| Nice write |
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