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Hurt You
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Even if the sun refused to shine,
And the stars turned black and grey,
Know that I want you to be mine,
I'll wait through every delay.
If I could hold you in my arms,
I'd kiss away your pain.
It is for you my smile charms,
Moves mountains, stops rain.
I know I lied in the past,
I've cried rivers to drown my heart.
But I know this love can last,
Because it's tearing my feelings apart.
I can't count the tears you've cried,
Nor can I make this all disappear,
That is what's killing me inside.
Other than love, I only feel fear.
I know I went way to far,
Forgiveness is what I'm asking for.
Even if you can't, you are what you are,
And for that, I love you more.
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2003-04-29 12:05:00]
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Re: Hurt You
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:35:27 PM AEST
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good write your feelings are dipicted vividly
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Re: Hurt You
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by vydana on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 06:05:33 PM AEST
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| Good poem :) |
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Re: Hurt You
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 09:22:47 PM AEST
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That's so beautiful! Sad but touching... almost made me wanna cry! Oh, I hope she forgives you! She'd be a fool not to. Everyone screws up from time to time (lord do I know that's true) and you're such an amazing person with a beautiful soul.
Blessed be,
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Re: Hurt You
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by frozensuicide on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:46:34 PM AEST
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| this is very beautiful. i love it. you have so much love and passion for this person in it. i hope you dont lose her. |
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Re: Hurt You
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 01:45:11 AM AEST
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GUESS WHAT??!!
She forgave me. I'm soooooooo happy right now.... I think I'll write another poem.... |
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Re: Hurt You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 11:08:04 AM AEST
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I am sooooo glad she forgave you. everyone messes up from time to time. Just try not to do it again!
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Re: Hurt You
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 2nd May 2003 @ 01:20:23 AM AEST
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| beautiful! hugs n' love to you n' yours, always nessa |
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Re: Hurt You
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by vahtang on
Monday, 5th October 2009 @ 07:29:25 AM AEST
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