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The Red Crimson Tide
Contributed by
erniej
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Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 12:28:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The passions of lovers
Stir up inside
With merely a gaze
Into each other’s eyes
The longer detained
Till their time to unite
Enhances the fervor
Of fantasies delight
To great dismay
All desires have died
Washed away by
The Red Crimson Tide
Copyright ©
erniej
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2011-08-13 12:28:10]
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Re: The Red Crimson Tide
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by CommasCanSeperate on
Saturday, 13th August 2011 @ 12:49:02 PM AEST
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I went through this a couple of weeks ago. Thanks for summing my feelings up in a few stanzas something I could never do x
Brilliant read, thanks x |
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Re: The Red Crimson Tide
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th August 2011 @ 02:58:52 PM AEST
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| LOL. Annoyingly funny. |
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