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Don`t cry...
Contributed by
gypsymaddness
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Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 06:23:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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I don`t like this It make`s me remember things The feeling of loosing a loved one... I cant describe it none THINK OF SOMETHING ELSE He`ll be fine He`s a strong one... HE WAS IN WAR! Remember, dont cry He`ll be all right...
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Re: Don`t cry...
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 06:40:12 PM AEST
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Sad but good work. blessings,
emy |
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Re: Don`t cry...
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 11th August 2011 @ 07:50:31 PM AEST
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| Good poem. I can feel the deep melancholy in it. I can relate to the sorrow right now. Great job! |
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Re: Don`t cry...
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by julesxo on
Friday, 12th August 2011 @ 02:52:10 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem, you can see the emotion transparently throughout. i hope everything works out for you. |
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