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When Depression Takes Hold
Contributed by
2bpositive
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Sunday, 7th August 2011 @ 09:21:15 AM in AEST
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Where am I, really needing to know
I am all alone, and feeling so low
the point has past, tears no longer flow
just wanting to run, with nowhere to go
Thinking back, a time when it had all started
unknowingly, destiny had already been charted
my mind so pained, carrying a troubled heart
mistakenly thinking, depression I could outsmart
Being wrong, I will necessarily admit
no more excuses, promising to commit
I acknowledge my fears, this is the truth
coming back to haunt me, sins of my youth
At times although distraught, I will not surrender
placing my faith in G-d, may He be my defender
if pain has reached me, it must be for my own good
G-d's way of correcting, this kindness was understood
So I have come to accept my pain, it's only for the best
my mind is now less troubled, my soul can find some rest
lessons to be learned, worth much, if we will only believe
even in our darkest moments, we have the power to achieve
Our tribulations in life, they will never ever cease to be
part of growing is to open your eyes and finally see
there is light, but out of the darkness it's hard to perceive
everything that happens is for the better, why forever to grieve
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2011-08-07 09:21:15]
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Re: When Depression Takes Hold
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by mvvenkataraman on
Monday, 8th August 2011 @ 02:25:16 AM AEST
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Dear respected 2bpositive,
If you write like this often
Depression will run away
You possess potential
Your write is nice and fine
You have the poetic ability
You can surely achieve
Kindly take my best wishes
Thank you for this beauty
May God strengthen you.
Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
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Re: When Depression Takes Hold
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 8th August 2011 @ 06:00:30 AM AEST
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Sometimes, writing out your thoughts and feelings is a good way to purge yourself from them.
It is certainly therapeutic.
Good luck
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Re: When Depression Takes Hold
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 9th August 2011 @ 02:49:18 AM AEST
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That poem was absolutely beautiful. Accepting that sadness is a part of life is something that not many people can do, especially when they don't want to feel sad... but there is a beauty in sadness. Sadness is a cold mind numbing allure that leads you into its depths, and swallows you.
But it is important not to get lost inside yourself. Memory may be an aid to sadness sometimes, but it can also be an aid to love and happiness. It all depends on your perspective.
May you always find what you are looking for.
J |
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Re: When Depression Takes Hold
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by julesxo on
Friday, 12th August 2011 @ 02:56:18 PM AEST
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| i like how you used a tough time in your life to create beautiful art. good luck with everythiing and please keep writing! |
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