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partly cloudy
Contributed by
ming
on
Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 08:55:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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in a world
bigger than
Facebook
where grief
and joy
move
as ponderously
as tides with the weight
of oceans
behind
them
recuring dread
and a duskier
blue
than blues
an urge to
write words
as anchors
before
storm scuttled
dislike.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-08-06 08:55:17]
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Re: partly cloudy
(User Rating: 1 )
by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 09:52:09 AM AEST
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I can just imagine your hands sculpting this piece
The charismatic rhythm of your flow is intense
I admire the aspect of truth,franchised in this passage
in a world bigger than facebook!nice
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Re: partly cloudy
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 05:04:21 PM AEST
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I have to admit I have not come across one piece of your poetry that I have been dissatisfied with. Every one-especially this one-
Conjures the imagination and its potential to make one drift away into a parallel reality. Eloquently and creatively written this was,
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Re: partly cloudy
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th August 2011 @ 12:32:23 AM AEST
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Well done.
Great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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