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Burning Soul
Contributed by
waynster
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Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 06:18:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel the heat from my soul
Burning through my skin
It’s like a force field
Nothing goes out and nothing goes in
A strange feeling
it may be
A feeling
Of someone controlling me
Negative energy
Because it makes me feel so bad
This is a feeling
One that makes me sad
I think my soul
Is trying to say something to me
Perhaps I am too negative
Therefore it wants to flee.
We all have our ups and downs
Wondering what we should do
Times like this can be emotional
And I share them with you
Copyright ©
waynster
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2011-08-06 06:18:25]
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Re: Burning Soul
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th August 2011 @ 12:47:00 AM AEST
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Well done.
blessings,
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Re: Burning Soul
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by mvvenkataraman on
Monday, 8th August 2011 @ 02:37:39 AM AEST
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Dear respected waynster,
I truly understand your feelings
All poets feel like you often
This is a must for a true poet
We only have such opportunity
It is purely gift of God to us
Deep thanks for your write
With best wishes, Yours truly,
mvvenkataraman
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