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Silent Cries
Contributed by
lilch4ever
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Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 06:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A whimper you can not hear.
The silent breaking of a heart you dare not hear.
That silent fear is the thing you fear.
The shadow of anger and rage.
That rage of agonizing pain.
That depression that soon follows.
The cry for help you yearn to speak.
The ending of pain you yearn to seek.
Angry outburst showering you with torturous rage.
The rage that only makes you fall dead on your face.
Those cruical words hurt you more than the person you didn't mean to inflect.
So young with a temper to kill.
A crazied teen ready to explode.
Words are like razors that cut through flesh.
Razor words leave wounds so big they may never heal.
Icy stares are a mixture of ice and fire of bullets entering an already wounded victim.
An open mouth which only silent words, cries release.
You can't hear that whimper.
But one can feel it within the very core of one's soul.
The burning desire to cry out and be heard.
That silent cry no one see's and no one hears.
Silent Cries are cries that go unheard.
Written: 2003
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lilch4ever
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Re: Silent Cries
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by faffeee on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 06:38:39 AM AEST
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great write, i really enjoyed it cos theres so much you can read into it and really interpret it in your own way and it can be applicable to anyone
"The cry for help you yearn to speak.
The ending of pain you yearn to seek. " sums up this whole feeling for me pretty much.
i hope you are ok, this is an awful thing to feel. a couple of poems i've written kinda reflect what you are feeling, but in slightly different ways, 'trying to escape the loneliness' is one, if u need to just feel you're not alone in feeling this. good luck with getting people to hear your cries ( i know that sounds so cheesy but its true!) xxx |
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Re: Silent Cries
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by afraid_of_fear on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 05:49:53 PM AEST
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i found this so lovely to read, but so sad too.
i know something of what you've written here..
hugs all round.
x_x_x |
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Re: Silent Cries
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 09:58:56 PM AEST
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This touched me deeply...I remember when I used to cry but no one would hear..cause my cries and screams were silent.. Lovely write. Wishing only the best for you....
Jenni |
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