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message in a dark pen
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2011 @ 10:05:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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shadows of falling night
quiet words dropped
silence
that
echos
words
falling
words
a weight
like bells
cast bronze
no lost things
at all when you dream
you are dreaming
things behind things
pillows
leave marks.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2011-08-02 10:05:05]
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Re: message in a dark pen
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2011 @ 12:04:35 AM AEST
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Very creative write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: message in a dark pen
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2011 @ 04:13:47 PM AEST
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I LOVE the quote and the poem! You made me think, and that is what I want when I read a poem. Anyone can write a cute little poem about cats or dogs, or the rain, but if you can make people think, that is a talent that not everyone has.
In weakness we can be devious... hmmmm.... I'm gonna think on that one. |
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Re: message in a dark pen
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 6th August 2011 @ 10:05:27 AM AEST
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In knowing this write is intuitive
in guessing it's remarkable
if this were scripted in laymen terms no one would believe,
truly a masterful piece, crafty
-UNORTHODOX |
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