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Rain Drops
Contributed by
mistersarang
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Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 08:31:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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falling rain, hearing every drop loud as day.
cutting my incomplete sentence, I can't seem to finish.
thinking over & over again. crossing each other.
confusion steps up & the feeling of emptiness
rises up. watching a sundown wondering will
the sun rise up again.
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mistersarang
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2011-08-01 20:31:31]
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Re: Rain Drops
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2011 @ 02:02:38 AM AEST
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| This is a slightly dark brooding poem but very well composed and beautifully executed. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Rain Drops
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 9th August 2011 @ 02:55:52 AM AEST
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| I liked the ominous feeling. Nice job. |
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Re: Rain Drops
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by FlintHunter on
Wednesday, 28th September 2011 @ 06:45:27 AM AEST
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'Rain Drops' is like the rain itself -- it just seems to fall from your self. I love the free-flowing of your thoughts; it is apparent that you'd let go of all constraints when this poem -- wrote you.
--FlintHunter
Contributed by mistersarang on Monday, August 01 2011 @ 20:31:31 AEST
Topic: Inspirational Poetry
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