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A Day at the Beach
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
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Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 03:34:13 PM in AEST
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DreamsandWishes
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A day at the beach
Sitting along the shore oh so peaceful it is
Majestic waves and their soothing motions so serene
As the sun beats down on me I ask myself
What more could I possibly desire?
Unfortunately a whole lot more is the answer
For I tend to feel alone without my beloved companion
He is over yonder cruising the glorious sea
Stopping by now and then to check on me
Little does he know a day at the beach gets old
I will eventually grow bored and need a friend
I wonder if my beloved friend realizes how I crave romance
Rather than just a hello and a passing glance
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2011-07-31 15:34:13]
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Re: A Day at the Beach
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 05:46:32 PM AEST
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Great writing.
Blessings |
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Re: A Day at the Beach
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 11:49:31 PM AEST
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we all crave romance when we are single. you should let him know how you feel.
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Re: A Day at the Beach
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by DrcGaimer on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2011 @ 01:50:10 PM AEST
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| I like this. Your expression quickly connects with the reader and causes them to feel for your situation. Great write. |
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