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love - how original...
Contributed by
essential
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Friday, 29th July 2011 @ 03:27:52 PM in AEST
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Is it so unusual to love, these days?
So unusual that noone understands it?
I was misunderstood in many ways
And by many insults offended.
Everyone is in love, sensitive and easily hurt,
But I have the feeling noone really understands
That their deinition of the word
Just means to be in secure hands.
If you are long enough secluded
You’d fall in love with anyone
Tell me is it really love for you
If it’s controlled by your environs?
I think I fell in love with this girl
Back three years ago, but still
I know I have no chance with her
And I know I never will
I say “I think” cause I’m not sure
What I call love you might call madness
Just like settling for the nearest lure
You call love and I call sadness.
And so I remain misunderstood
And alone till either way
My feelings change for my own good
Or until I die some day.
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Re: love - how original...
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by emystar on
Friday, 29th July 2011 @ 06:30:46 PM AEST
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Good writing. Very original.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: love - how original...
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 02:47:12 AM AEST
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| you should not be content with being alone if you want love. there are literally billions of people out there. you just have to find the right person. |
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Re: love - how original...
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by JRLatin77 on
Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 11:40:38 AM AEST
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First let me compliment you on the freedom and honesty of your poetry. I’m sure many young poets and readers can relate to the emotions in your poem. I say good work. A great add to this site.
By the way ((( deusdeira ))), does have a point.
No man is an Island.
You may feel this way now but soon you’ll realize the abundance of beautiful ships in the sea. Go swimming every once in a while, eventually you will find the right ship to sail. |
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