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Candles and Incense
Contributed by
Deidra_Carmichael
on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 07:31:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
didactic
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This intoxicating aroma is overbearing for one such as I
And yet it should not be so for one socializing in the next room
Can't you see this is all based on falsity and folly
A phase persuading you to feel comfortable with the lies and to escape the truth
As I am the hostess of a Divine party tis my duty to keep all light and holy
While crashers will try to wreck the theme confusing the innocent guests
Ah yes at one point you were one of those guests
And now you have turned to throw a celebration based on candles and incense
I will admit admit this head of mine is dizzy from correcting every fault caused here
These lips have blown out too many wicks spitefully lit by one so mislead
My daughter please do have compassion for the wise and earnest
For you are worth too much to be influenced by this unloving unfaithful order
This idea that you may find satisfaction and confidence from candles and incense
Copyright ©
Deidra_Carmichael
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2011-07-28 19:31:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Candles and Incense
(User Rating: 1 ) by FlintHunter on
Monday, 5th September 2011 @ 06:19:02 PM AEST (User
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What a heart-wrenching poem. It always amazes me how brave poets can be.... you would think we'd be meek book-wormy things... But you are so far from that you can't even imagine it. I am a parent too... what more can I say -- than how wonderful that you can express so tenderly your deep and difficult feelings. --flinthunter |
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