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A Place Called, ''Too Late''
Contributed by
ThornMEngla
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Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 08:13:13 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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A Place Called, "Too Late"
There is a gray place
With a big somber gate
Where a weary heart goes
When it just cannot take
The tangles of fortune
Through sad twists of fate
The heart goes in exile
To a place called "Too Late"
July 3, 2010
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ThornMEngla
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2011-07-28 08:13:13]
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Re: A Place Called, ''Too Late''
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 11:39:16 AM AEST
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I like the sentiment.
They do say you have to chase everything that you want, love, dreams, ambitions.
Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't but I guess only by trying will you know.
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Re: A Place Called, ''Too Late''
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 12:16:12 PM AEST
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A poem with the lenght of a momment
yet the meaning and life span of
eternity, very compelling, very beautiful . . .
likewise, ty . . .
my♥svoice
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Re: A Place Called, ''Too Late''
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 31st July 2011 @ 02:38:08 AM AEST
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That was beautifully crafted. I loved every single line. Well done with that one! Well done.
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Re: A Place Called, ''Too Late''
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by Shyness on
Thursday, 4th August 2011 @ 10:51:58 AM AEST
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| I like it... Keep it up |
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Re: A Place Called, ''Too Late''
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by applehead on
Wednesday, 7th December 2011 @ 01:28:40 PM AEST
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| Short and too the point with a touch of mystery to it. In short I like it, keep it up. |
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