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what i would give
Contributed by
pat517
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Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 02:03:42 AM in AEST
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V1: I would give up my whole life
for that chance for you too be my wife
for me and you too grow old
through the warm and the cold
i would give up the night
so i can see your face in the light
when i can stare into your eyes
and tell you not too cry
i would give up all the necessities
for you too stay with me
and you will see
that we were meant too be
I don't think you understand
what i would do to be your man
give up the light, give up the day
all for you too say
that you will stay
with me
V2:
I would give you the world
if only you would be my girl
too many times i have let you go
i'm ready too let our love grow
To be by your side
your rules i abide
too see you when the sun rises
with no surprises
can i be the one you want to call at night
when you want some one to hold you tight
i would give up all the necessities
for you too stay with me
and you will see
that we were meant too be
I don't think you understand
what i would do to be your man
give up time, give up money
give up the light, give up the day
all for you too say
that you will stay
with me
~May, 26, 2011~
~Patrick S. Simental~
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Re: what i would give
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 05:10:29 AM AEST
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I found the first two lines quite ironic:
I would give up my whole life
for that chance for you too be my wife
That could be a poem in itself, about someone who has to sell his soul for his one wish, knowing ultimately it will be his last.Maybe you could use that theme for your next lyrics.
Steve
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Re: what i would give
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 07:36:28 PM AEST
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I absolutely adored every line, every word of this poem! I have the same trouble with my poems being noticed on Facebook (it's like no one really wants to take the time to view my response to life). Take care and God bless,
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