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True Blue.
Contributed by
Sparkz16
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Wednesday, 27th July 2011 @ 08:36:06 PM in AEST
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Once the sky was blue, cloudless blue. The kinda blue you only dream holding in your palms. This blue hue is a happy blue. Once there was a dream, a peaceful dream. The kinda dream you wished was true. Kinda like the Blue hue you dreamed was true. Now that blue has gone a hazy gray. The hazy gray that only comes out on a day like today. Last nights dream wasn’t a dream at all, just a memory. You know the memories you want to forget, but like that hazy gray they just stay, what happened to that true blue dream we use to see? Is it in you or is it in me?
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Re: True Blue.
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 03:11:51 AM AEST
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Re: True Blue.
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 07:40:08 PM AEST
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The theme and rhymschemw as well as play on word kept my attention. A very good write I must say! May that true blue come back to you an God bless,
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Re: True Blue.
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by Sparkz16 on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 07:53:35 PM AEST
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