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The Lost World of Love
Contributed by
deusdeira
on
Monday, 25th July 2011 @ 04:52:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Falling through clouds of despair...
trying to grab your hopes and dreams to slow the fall,
as the pain engulfs you and you yearn for death's call,
fighting the pain while it causes your body to ache,
and it grasps your heart... as your mind lies waste...
to everything that you hold dear,
destroying all the hard earned love with fear,
and you try so hard to break out of the pain that holds you,
but the only cure is to forget everything you thought you knew,
forget the life you had,
forget all your dreams,
forget the past,
and rip apart the seams,
forget that perfect face,
and everything it means,
forget all the memories,
forget her haunting melody....
But we cannot will ourselves to forget love or pain,
So we must remember every day what we have lost...
So that we will always remember the cost...
of giving our hearts to those undeserving,
a fatal mistake... as we watch our hearts churning,
To forget is never an option in life,
but the pain is much worse... than the blade of a knife...
never give up what was yours all along,
or your may become lost... in a world that is gone.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
... [
2011-07-25 04:52:44]
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Re: The Lost World of Love
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by Banjosandwitch on
Monday, 25th July 2011 @ 07:21:14 AM AEST
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| HAVE TEARS IN MY EYES SO MEANING FULL |
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Re: The Lost World of Love
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 25th July 2011 @ 04:06:30 PM AEST
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this is awesome, i was drawn between
this tittle and the one right beneath it,
Ocean of sorrow but this tittle was so
provacative, and then the poem just
spoke for it's self, a most compelling
piece of writting, devistatingly lucid.
ty likwise for visiting my page.
Ben :) |
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Re: The Lost World of Love
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by poeticjestix on
Monday, 25th July 2011 @ 04:29:50 PM AEST
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| you pushed this toward the reader yet I believed it was your cross to bear. Such is life |
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Re: The Lost World of Love
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 28th July 2011 @ 11:37:39 AM AEST
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Beautifully written.
The pain seeps out from every line.
Well done.
Steve |
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Re: The Lost World of Love
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by krissy26 on
Tuesday, 29th November 2011 @ 07:12:18 AM AEST
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| very emotional, i love it, very good! |
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