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The Straws
Contributed by
zeberdee
on
Saturday, 23rd July 2011 @ 09:05:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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I tumble around here in another time and space
The lucidity of these few stimulating straws quickly
whisking outside my grasp again with their swaying grace
I get lost for a small period in this state thats thickly
overcome me on this small cozy chair
I close my eyes put forth my hand to reach
the straws and I get them once each
and I am total, I am fully overcome at my altair
This is not a fragile dream anymore
I am no longer idle, passive and numb
I can hold it, the straw, with both feets on the floor
I am total. I am complete. Salvation has come
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zeberdee
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2011-07-23 21:05:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Straws
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 24th July 2011 @ 06:32:35 AM AEST (User
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Salvation as indeed come! Nicely constructed poem. Well done. |
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