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It's You He Loves Not Me!
Contributed by
Debz
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Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I've read your poems about me
yes, I've read all three
And I'm disgusted that you feel
I'm the one your man loves for real
Open your eyes and you will see
It's you he loves, not me!
If trust is lacking in your relationship
then you need to look at that, not our friendship
Don't point the finger of blame
for yours is the head to be hung low with shame
You're obsessed with feelings of inadequecy
Consumed with untold jealousy
You know about my life and how difficult it's been
Damn, you must have a low opinion of me
If you think I'm capable of such deception
That my heart is filled with such corruption
How dare you play these games with me
Constantly analysing everything you see
After all, what does it take
to convince you all it was is friendship, for god's sake!
nothing more, nothing less
Now, you've created an awkwardness
that will never, ever leave us
nothing you say now will make ammends
so, thank you for that, my dear "friend"
for now I've lost another
Damn...why should I even bother?
Copyright ©
Debz
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2003-04-29 01:45:00]
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Re: It's You He Loves Not Me!
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 03:17:49 AM AEST
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| this is really good, an amazing write, i cant relate to it but it struck some cords so to speak, keep up the great work... |
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Re: It's You He Loves Not Me!
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 11:12:24 AM AEST
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I think people sometimes over analyse things and see thigs that aren't even there!! A great poem that has been written from the heart.
Thanks for sharing.
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